Here are some sample revision requests and how they could be revised to better enhance the quality of your finished project:
Less Effective: Focusing on the Solution
» Can you make the author’s name bigger and make it bold?
» Can you move this image an inch to the right?
» Can you change it to Comic Sans?
More Effective: Focusing on the Problem
» Can you do something to focus more attention on the author’s name?
» This area looks unbalanced, can you fix that?
» We are looking for a clean, minimal font that is easy to read; can you show us some options?